JOHN DONNE (1572-1631)

A VALEDICTION: FORBIDDING MOURNING

ANALISI STRUTTURALE

1      As virtuous men pass mildly away,
2         And whisper to their souls, to go,
3     Whilst some of their sad friends do say,
4         "The breath goes now," and some say, "No:"

5     So let us melt, and make no noise,
6         No tear-floods, nor sigh-tempests move;
7     'Twere profanation of our joys
8         To tell the laity our love.

9      Moving of th' earth brings harms and fears;
10       Men reckon what it did, and meant;
11    But trepidation of the spheres,
12        Though greater far, is innocent.

13    Dull sublunary lovers' love
14        (Whose soul is sense) cannot admit
15   Absence, because it doth remove
16        Those things which elemented it.

17   But we by a love so much refin'd,
18       That ourselves know not what it is,
19    Inter-assured of the mind,
20       Care less, eyes, lips, and hands to miss.

21   Our two souls therefore, which are one,
22       Though I must go, endure not yet
23   A breach, but an expansion,
24       Like gold to airy thinness beat.

25   If they be two, they are two so
26       As stiff twin compasses are two;
27   Thy soul, the fix'd foot, makes no show
28       To move, but doth, if the' other do.

29   And though it in the centre sit,
30       Yet when the other far doth roam,
31   It leans, and hearkens after it,
32       And grows erect, as that comes home.

33   Such wilt thou be to me, who must
34       Like th' other foot, obliquely run;
35   Thy firmness makes my circle just,
36       And makes me end, where I begun.

NOTES

Form:

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1.

According to Izaak Walton, addressed by Donne to his wife when he was about to set out for France in 1612.

9.

Moving of th' earth: earthquake.

11.

trepidation of the spheres. The precession of the equinoxes under the Ptolemaic system was explained as caused by the shaking or trepidation of the outermost, crystalline sphere of the universe.

12.

innocent: harmless.

13.

sublunary: earthly; everything below the moon was thought subject to change; above it was "unchangeable firmament,'' as Donne says in "The Fever," playing with the same metaphor.

14.

Whose soul is sense: see note on "The Ecstasy," lines 53-56.

16.

elemented: were the elements of, composed.

19.

Inter-assured of the mind. "For we consist of three parts, a Soul and Body, and Minde: which [mind] I call those affections and thoughts and passions which neither soul nor body hath alone but have been begotten by their communication, as Musique results out of our breath and a cornet" (Donne).

 

 

 

 

 

ANALISI STRUTTURALE